by Phoenix Arrow
This story feels exactly how I would react if I was a mother
I would love to read more that daughter could make her mom do many good things are not so good maybe the ride home she could force her mom to be nude are make her do something for all the girls!
I wish you had a series on DeeDee and her friends teasing their mommies nut never touching them. Knowing that they have their pathetic masturbating mommies wrapped around their fingers
The temptation to do a follow up to this story must have been tremendous, but you left it just right.
You've simply got to write a sequel to this! This is as the title indicates, hot beyond belief. She has got too, at least, take another trip, whether to the mall, or the waving Mother's house! Now that's a thought!
You're as much as a tease as those fucking teens. I was expecting the 2nd page to be as long as the first but you give me one measly paragraph? :(
When you write a story try to think of how the reader feels only because it makes it easier to put an ending that makes the story great.....your endind was a letdown buTt keep on practising........:)
Wow. The first page was absolutely amazing! No complaints at all... but thats IT!? After that huge tease and THATS the ending we get? What a waste of time....
Really good, but I hope you accentuate a submissives need to be so in the future. Again really good.
awesome story!
could there posibly be a story about the mother's dream/wish cumming true?
just a thought
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Being a bit older, how about another story of grand mothers in similar situations...
I'm sure there are lots of mothers out there who have that feeling on a regular basis. Only hoping their daughter is as understanding, lol!!!
Great story
Oh yes I can just see those sweet teasing teens and their cute little panties.................. thanks for a hot story Mom.
do more stories like that makes you feel like you are there the whole time
Absolutely super hot! A wonderful tale about all that is desirable about healthy young women including how MUCH we desire them.
I absolutely LOVED the story and hope there are more chapters/stories to come. The details and storyline were incredible and definately NOT mainstream/ordinary!!