by SimonDoom
I'm sure that was one hell of an explanation! I can't wait to read the finished Andersen project. Maybe Teddy Bear will help her with it? He does seem to be a talented toy bear. Maybe he's a reincarnation of Teddy Roosevelt himself?
What if she gets pregnant by Teddy Bear? I guess that's a stretch because it would be a cross species pregnancy. It could happen, but the offspring would be infertile, as they are in the case of mules (donkeys plus horses). I could go on, but it's beginning (?) to sound silly. Five stars, nevertheless. ~~ JB
What a fun, inventive well written story!
Great use of dialogue, hot kinky sex, vivid characters, even a believable talking bear.
But poor Mr. Jenkinson. I hope that if there is a sequel, he gets some. If not from Eleanor, then at least a talking female bear of his own?
Maybe HE gave Eleanor the bear?
Please don't let it be Lyle...
Interesting story. Love to hear more and find out where he came from. Still wanting more of hotel exhibiionist
One of the most inventive stories I've read here or anywhere. Loved it, thanks for posting your tale.
That, Master Doom, was masterful.
I laughed at the touch of cappuccino cream on her lip, and yes, I'll forgive the Lit typo from hell.
Waist, my good man, not waste.
"I did tell him not to rely on spell-check, to always keep an eye on context," said Suzie, "but he kept going on about spices."
This is perhaps the most imaginative tale I've read on Lit in a very long time. IMHO you are very disturbed, SD which is part of your charm. Your style is simple and crisp, amazingly to the point. Where Penis Fish was an exercise in far-fetched scifi, by comparison, Teddy Bear is a masterpiece in suspension of disbelief. Excellent story telling! Keep writing; your fans will never get enough.
I love this story !
I normally don’t read this type of story but I am so glad I did..
I have read it so many so many times and it still gets me going
I hope there will be another chapter to this story
I read about this story in the forum thread (realism vs fantasy). An outstanding tale, perfectly delivered. I enjoyed it to the max and now I feel inspired to think about an own story like this one. It really gave me a new perspective on fantastic twists within erotica.
Thank you!!
I saw a link for this story in the AH. I enjoyed the story. Well written, wonderfully paced. I won't lie, I couldn't get into the actual sex, but I'm gay, so I can't hold that against you. Bravo.
Loved it! What a inventive story. Now you've got us all wondering where he came from, and will he cum again?