All Comments on 'Teenage Dream'

by Dar_Jisbo

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ReedRichardsReedRichardsover 5 years ago
I certainly don’t mind it when a woman takes the lead, but . . .

. . . the way Marissa was written was a complete downer. You may do this, you may now do that. It sounds like some feminists’ idea of informed consent, those ideas written by women who don’t like sex with men in the first place.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Look again

ReedRichards, I count precisely one use of Marissa saying "You may do this" in some form. ONE. I think you exaggerate your case.

LudvigBlomSELudvigBlomSEover 2 years ago

i find myself wondering about those comments. What's wrong with a woman taking the lead? Seemingly the boy was not very experienced and would be very grateful!

My only objection to the story is that it kind of stpped to short. It could have been made into a full love story. There sure was love enough between the characters, 5 veak stars doe to shortness ;-)

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