All Comments on 'Teenage Fantasy Ch. 02'

Looks like true love to me! 🤣

Great continuation and character development. Hope there is a sequel with so many directions for you to develop further.

I love the blowjob... it's so sensual

It just might be 😉

Thank you, anonymous! I am so glad that you enjoyed the continuation. I will be posting a couple more parts to complete the teenage series, so keep an eye out for me :) 

That you I am glad you enjoyed that scene!

I’m so glad there’s a sequel and more to come! Amazing job, keep at it!

You need to continue this story. Very enjoyable.

I'm thoroughly impressed with your storytelling!

Thank you guys so much for reading and leaving a comment! I was concerned that Part 2 wasn't connecting with readers, so thank you for the feedback!

This chapter is a superb continuation Teenage Fantasy. The story is carefully crafted, and the plot builds slowly, working its way to the heart-filled climax. The romantic atmosphere pervades the story, and this all adds up to a sequel that fully deserves a five stars rating.

How soon for part three?

I'm in love with Mabel ❣️

Anonymous, I am so thrilled to read your review! Thank you so much for your kind words! I am overjoyed that you enjoyed the sequel!

Thank you for asking! I am working on Part 3 right now. It will be a shorter part as I am also writing the finale. I have been posting at 2-month intervals because I want to make sure that the work I am putting out remains consistent.

Yes, me too! I am so happy that you enjoy her character!

Wao, just wao. Such a splendid cute story. It's wonderful. Please continue. 11 out of 10 ❤️

This is one of those stories. Good shit

Make a part 3 asap

Was really enjoying it until you started with the domination theme. How about drop that!

So good! This has to be ny favourite series I have ever read! The story progression, the character development, everything 100%! Keep up the good work!

Thank you so much, guys! I'm delighted you like the story; part 3 will be out soon.

Regarding the concept of dominance, this narrative will not in any way develop a D/s, M/s, or similar dynamic. Nevertheless, (fair warning) it will include dominance plays from both of my characters as well as hair pulling, spanking, choking etc., and light commands and directions. I don't want it to take away from the story, but I'm adding it in the hopes that it will highlight how two people grow into who they are through exploring and enjoying one another. In certain sequences, I want both of my characters to toy with dominance in a way that is relevant to them. If this is something that doesn't sound like you'd want to continue because it changes your enjoyment of the story i completely understand. Thank you for reading what you enjoyed and your support!

sad to see you going in that direction with this story i will not read it and possiblynot read anything else you write if that is going to be your style

I love this series so far. Please make the other parts longer too. I would like to see them doing it while the mother is at house and they are trying to be quiet. Love the concept of dominance.

I love the inner dialogue. The sex is amazing. I look forward to a continuation of the story.

I completely understand. Thank you for feedback!

Thank you very much! I'm glad you're enjoying the series! That sounds like a fun idea! In part 4, I might be able to meet you in the middle. Thank you for reading!

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy the dialogue and scenes!

Amazing! Waiting for the next chapter. Everything about the story is wonderful 5/5, I. Can’t find anything a bad about the story.

SheSaidSheWas18 thank you so much!! I am so glad that you enjoy the story!!

in the first part you had Mabel going to help him graduate and get a football schollorship and maybe a pro and her becmoing a doctor.. hope that will not be totally eliminated with you going for a more kinky sex side.

I think it needs the sequel. Good character development.

How soon for part 3?

When will part 3 be out?

Sorry guys! I haven't checked my comments in a while. Part 3 is now available; if you would like to read it, I hope you enjoy it and that it answers some of your questions about their dynamic (kinky sex included).

Expectations fulfilled; a great Part Two.

Thank you KachinaDoll I am glad you enjoyed it!

Good chapter and great continued character development but the rough aspects dampened things for me a bit. Mabel is learning but Jake seems to be pushing her too far too fast and I worry that it will come back and bite them. Good job on addressing the BC issue, but where was Mabel’s mom? I kept expecting her to walk in on them since they didn’t appear to be making any effort to be quiet! Looking forward to part 3.

I appreciate you continuing to engage with the story, SouthernCrossfire! I think that dampened things for a lot of readers, since I've seen a few comments along the same lines as yours, and I completely understand. In defense of Jake, he was also affected by it. I probably didn't convey his feelings as effectively as I should have in my writing, but he was regretful of his actions and reflective on how he should move forward. Hopefully, Part 3 served to clarify how he grew from this a little bit more.

I appreciate how some are turned off by the rough aspects of sex between Jake and Mabel. However, Jake is learning what he likes just as much as Mabel is, and Mabel clearly likes it a little more raw and rough as well. This is well written. I do think Mabel is strong enough to turn Jake's domination on end and switch things up at some point. That would be pretty neat. Mabel clearly holds a lot of power in this relationship.

You’re a visionary

The best I’ve read on this site in quite some time. This reads much more like a novel than hobby porn.

One small note—I think you meant “ministrations” instead of “menstruations” in the cunnilingus scene.

They’re, umm…different.

But the story itself is great!

Lol thanks for that! I'll submit the edit. I believe a fellow author also mentioned this to me and I forgot to submit the change so I will make sure to do that!

Started on this series to get to the romance post of it. Great teenage coming of age story, but while sex was interesting the first ten times, the story ignores too many plot lines that significantly effect going forward. Where's mom as she was "cautious" about Mabel and Jake's relationship? What's he going to do after graduation? Where is she going to college given her grades? Is this relationship going to cause her to miss her shot at valedictorian? Will they be able to put sex aside to focus on his grades so he can at least graduate? Where are his parents in his life? 4.5*

She says she doesn't love him, but her actions prove differently. If they continue like they are, they could be parents. He loves her enough to be her husband, and, no matter what she says, she loves him...