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Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesabout 9 years ago
Just a pointer:

When you're referring to a person by their title only, such as "your aunt" or "my uncle", you don't need to capitalize it. But when it becomes part of their name, it's grammatically correct to do so. You could write "That's my aunt and uncle, Phyllis and Jim" but it would become "She's my Aunt Phyllis, and that's her husband, my Uncle Jim". Get it? (I don't want to belabor the point, or to sound patronizing.)

I don't write this as an excuse to beat you up about it, but it was a little distracting to keep reading "aunt Sheela". I'm only attempting to give you a constructive pointer to help your writing improve.

Angiesteve69Angiesteve69about 9 years agoAuthor
Thanx to epiphany_jones

Thank you for your the help. I'll try to avoid that mistake in mu future stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
great ending

loved the anal part chain and collar .would loved to be him mmmmm2e4d

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26 year old Sri Lankan male. I'm writing stories as a hobby. Huge fan of incest romance stories. Specially woman being older. So, all of my stories would be about them. My submissions are quite slow because I have to balance this with my studies. Thanx for all the readers. Kee...

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