All Comments on 'Telepath King Ch. 04'

Really like the story line and can't wait for more chapters.

I got this far and the Story is fantastic.

I can understand the way he feels with everything Dropped on him and he was Moments away from Suicide.

Going to try and finish the rest of Your Story will leave comments as I go.

But this chapter started off by confusing me. Tommy says he has enough money to pay for everything but wasn't he broke and soon to be homeless.

But other than that it was great

Please get an editor. The story is good, the pacing is good, the characters are individual and multi-faceted, the spelling is sub-par. You're every time it should be Your, it's the Shah of Iran, not the Shaw, Its vs. It's, etc. It pulls the reader out of the story when they have to correct the words as they read them.