All Comments on 'Telepath King Ch. 15'

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hodunkhodunkover 12 years ago
Getting Better YET

love the twist of this chapter! Keep'em comin.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

You are developing this story beautifully. What a perfect twist to he story, and I hope we are going to see some more twists in future chapters.

Bigmanx31Bigmanx31over 12 years ago

I surely didnt see that twist coming. Keep up the good work. Look forward to the next chapter

masque83masque83over 12 years ago

Finally we're getting into more story instead of endless sex scene after sex scene. Thank you for that

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

oh nice touch.... i like the twist... keep it up

Barber_o_SavilleBarber_o_Savilleover 12 years ago
Great Story Series

I like how you developed the characters. I hope there is more to this than leaving it open in Chapter 15. Would like to know if he finds his ex bf and his buddy and what would happen to him.

Interesting twist with Juliet and all; wonder if he will actually find the girl, wonder if he will marry Mandy.

To many unanswered questions.

C_frommnC_frommnover 12 years ago
Well I Hope

You continue to add to this Story.

it's just getting interesting to see where he goes from here and what happens to Juliet now that he knows she is not his True Telepathic Wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
keep it going

Wow... the sex scenes are hot, and the story is hella awesome.... please continue on in this endever.... or I will be very sad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Been reading this over the past couple of days, and it is terrific!

A really interesting story, with great sex scenes!

Hope there is still more to come, can't wait to see what happens next...

izzyestrella12izzyestrella12over 12 years ago
LOVE IT

loving the story so far. can't wait to find out what Tom will do with Teresa and Juliet, maybe even andie.....

keep it up and update soon please!!!!

DRGRIFFINDRGRIFFINover 12 years ago
More please.....

So far, I have been completely engrossed in the series and cannot wait for more to come. It is too bad the there is only a five-star rating - I was hoping for fifteen or twenty...

I eagerly await more...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Finally!

I have been enjoying the story thus far (grammatical errors aside) but I have been waiting for something like the twist you've added here. The sex is good, but a really great story adds a human element and conflict. The end of this chapter captures that wonderfully.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

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