All Comments on 'Tell Me No Lies'

Good

I didn't quite understand everything But enough to like it

Love your stories and especially your phrasing.

And thanks for continuing to write, mentor, and genuinely make this a better place.

Nice

Great lies! If lies can connect, bring them on.

5

What a talent you have. Always well-written and interesting. Always looking forward to your next story. Thank you for sharing.

G

I love another one of your stories. Thank you for writing these wonders. 5 stars from Xluckylee

I'm sorry, I'm a little confused. What's the lie? Is the lie the truth? And if it is the truth, then it wouldn't be a lie would it? She wants them to communicate better by telling each other lies? I really enjoyed the characters as always, but I don't get lie thing?

Well done and thanks. Always interesting to see how you weave the story.

Fun, thank you.

Unusual.

Whatever works for a couple

should be used.

This was a warm and interesting story.

Thanks blackrandl for the story

and for getting other great writers

to write about lies.

4 out of 5 from me.

Good story about true love. It's good to see a couple talk and iron out their problems. Worthwhile story to read.

DG

Good story and interesting done. Most importantly I was entertained and couldn’t ask for more even if I was paying. Thank you for posting.

Please keep writing and I will keep reading.

Excellent '!.

Sigh... Just one more awesome story from blackrand.

Love it thank you!

Gorgeous, fun, whimsical characters & writing!

Well done.

I think no matter how close spouses are to each other, most men & women have (or feel like they have) their 'role' for which they are responsible in their marriage. It can be really challenging for a man if he believes that he's not living up to what he thinks are his obligations. Sheldon is blessed to have a spouse that is exactly what he needs.

Second time read. Even better than the first. Hope your next story is coming soon. Thanks again.

G

Great Story! I truly enjoyed it!

Very good story; the second of yours that I've read, I'll keep browsing your submissions. Old, white guy here, so I had to look up some of the slang you used; almost the only reason I didn't rate it higher. (One of my issues with Lit.com; only 5 stars, and for me 5 means perfection, unattainable.) Recently started writing myself, for myself; I rarely rate or comment on stories because I don't pay much attention to the few I've gotten. Anyway; nicely done.

you write some great stories and your perspective is different, which makes them more enjoyable.

Love this! Lie to me.

Best,

CCC

Great story. We all have insecurities over time in our lives and our marriages. It is our duty as true loving spouses to bolster our lived ones when they need some support.

I’d be lying if I said I didn’t love this story.

Thanks for a delightfully charming read!

Randi, I hope you know that Deb and I would love any story of yours, even if it detailed how to change the oil in your car! Another great read.

Very good

The talent you have writing stories is obvious and amazing. Your characters come alive and are like real people. Your story lines are always taking twists and turns and unexpected directions.

This is simply one more example.

Thanks!

Great, professional piece of work. Thank you for being you.

LOVELY, LOVELY, LOVELY. We att want to live in your family!

Wonderful story, very sweet and sincere.

I really resonate with Peyton. We have a very similar personality. Although I'm a dude.

I'm a little weird, maybe a lot weird. But it's fine, and people I like seem to enjoy it.

Very loyal, but an accidental flirt. Just because I'm a warm person to talk with.

And I accidentally go hard when I have a fight with my spouse. Hate it. But it happens.

Really nice story.

Thank you Randi, enjoyed your tale - 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

Sweet story! (As a guy I don't use that word often). Well done :)

Congrats on 100 works Ms. Randi! Sweet and a little spicy, like most of your works.

Why can't I give 10 stars? Really, really good!

I really liked this story, because it deals with relationship maintenance in a good way. Bravo to you, Randi. I can't recall coming across many other stories that have done something like this, on this site. We need more of this !

As usual, brilliant work. I know the LW category is what the author makes it. I just wish there were a few more stories like this one. A truly loving wife.

And congrats on #100

DP

Epiphany. Love: come as you are....

Yes, most people who gravitate to LW stories expect a knife to come out somewhere, but the few excellent stories about truly loving wives are like finding an emerald hidden in the jungle. This was a big beautiful gem just waiting to be picked up. Thank you!

👍👍👍👍💯💯💯🙄🤷🙋🌹🍕🍕🌭🌭🍺🍺😉

We both can't believe what a great writer you are. 😉

life ain't always wine and roses . even good marriages and good relationships of all kinds need some maintenance and care .