All Comments on 'Telling Mom Pt. 00 - Prologue'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Can’t wait for chapter 2

Very nice. I hope more is coming soon.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 4 years ago
So realistic

Moms feel guilty even when seeing the hard ons are innocent. The "ah ah" moment that spurs so many incestuous relationships.

homerjayhomerjayalmost 4 years ago
nice one.

good start. hope chapter 2 has more meat on the bones. thanks.

Stormwalker10027Stormwalker10027almost 4 years ago
Barely even a concept

Not sure if you understand the idea of erotic stories and/or incest if literally nothing happens in your extremely short essay. You do seem to have a good writing style, but i would recommend that you wait until you actually had more than a few paragraphs and call it a chapter before you post it. The only tags for this story that were really in it was "mother".

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Just here to share some real stories, and some not-so-real stories. Hope they make you horny! ;)

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