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All Comments on 'Temperature Changes Ch. 01'

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crazysexykool93crazysexykool93about 6 years ago
Promising

Looks good so far, keep it up!

teddybearclubteddybearclubabout 6 years ago
I Like It

None of the "Jump Your Bones" right off the bat. A story has to have some build up. Fine writing and if there are any spelling of grammatical mistakes didn't see them. Keep up the good work. As they say I Await With Bated Breath.

Chrissie

TBC

Eugenia4allEugenia4allabout 3 years ago

ohhhh, romance is happening here! love it. great writing!

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