by OmgWTFDeb
I like the build up and story line....in one of the next ones I am sure to finish myself off lol
Your casual leadup to something happening between the two of them is okay, but reader's patience may deter them from continuing to watch for future installments. Don't overlook using a spell-checker/grammar checker to eliminate typos.
WOW, The way you are building each chapter is awesome
By all means Please Continue.
Looking forward to Chapter 3
5 Stars
going great so far bath s over Matts beat his meat amd then along came mom but whats next?
Great! discriptive, sexy, almost felt like I was there.
Ps make the stories a little longer, my imagination is'nt as good as yours. JD
I feel like I painted myself into a corner with the storyline. If anyone has any suggestions on where the story can go, please let me know.
It's hard not to think about what comes next, there is so much potential. Good story, so far, thanks
You want hints? Mom could always have a small slip in the bath, or she comes in for a hug from the son and he's still jerking off and his erection penetrates her robe do she can feel it and with her reading preference, it sets up things in her mind. Son has to take Mom to her PCP doctor and she is forced to ask for son's help with matching clothes, etc. Good luck, from a fantasizer😘
There is too much more of this story. Like she knew all the time he was there watching and put on a show for him. And an obviously incestuous relationship in the wings..
Many options in directions you could take this. Continue the audio book and the son can act out some of the scenes. Mom tries to do laundry but messes up and needs help. With mom's eyes covered her hearing is better and hears son watching her so she exposes more of herself openly masturbating in front of him. Mom has an accident and falls naked and has to call son for help, but after taking her to the ER she has a cast on her arm, and now needs even more hands on help. A follow up Doctor appt could lead to son picking out clothes helping her dress, go to the bathroom, bathing or showering, him getting an erection and poking her with it as he is washing her. So many options... please continue