All Comments on 'Temporarily Blind Mother Ch. 02'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 3 years ago
Loves grown deep

Absolutely beautiful

LabiaLoveLabiaLoveover 3 years ago
Keep going

Good premise. Hope you keep going with it

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More please!

I like the build up and story line....in one of the next ones I am sure to finish myself off lol

jonboy1985jonboy1985over 3 years ago

Oh yes keep going this is very good

grayge37grayge37over 3 years ago

Your casual leadup to something happening between the two of them is okay, but reader's patience may deter them from continuing to watch for future installments. Don't overlook using a spell-checker/grammar checker to eliminate typos.

Deano1060Deano1060over 3 years ago

Great story, keep them coming.

Snipe85Snipe85over 3 years ago
A Really HOT Story

WOW, The way you are building each chapter is awesome

By all means Please Continue.

Looking forward to Chapter 3

5 Stars

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 3 years ago

Strong follow up effort. I like where this is going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
and then

going great so far bath s over Matts beat his meat amd then along came mom but whats next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Ch. 03

I hope you keep this thread going

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Next chapter?

When will the next chapter be?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Great! discriptive, sexy, almost felt like I was there.

Ps make the stories a little longer, my imagination is'nt as good as yours. JD

4jeryguys4jeryguysover 3 years ago
Next chapter

I'd love to read the following chapters!!

OmgWTFDebOmgWTFDebover 2 years agoAuthor

I feel like I painted myself into a corner with the storyline. If anyone has any suggestions on where the story can go, please let me know.

BassNutt51BassNutt51over 2 years ago

It's hard not to think about what comes next, there is so much potential. Good story, so far, thanks

BassNutt51BassNutt51over 2 years ago

You want hints? Mom could always have a small slip in the bath, or she comes in for a hug from the son and he's still jerking off and his erection penetrates her robe do she can feel it and with her reading preference, it sets up things in her mind. Son has to take Mom to her PCP doctor and she is forced to ask for son's help with matching clothes, etc. Good luck, from a fantasizer😘

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Thank you so much

Very well interesting

Michael

Seadog971Seadog971almost 2 years ago

There is too much more of this story. Like she knew all the time he was there watching and put on a show for him. And an obviously incestuous relationship in the wings..

ManningDP69ManningDP69over 1 year ago

Many options in directions you could take this. Continue the audio book and the son can act out some of the scenes. Mom tries to do laundry but messes up and needs help. With mom's eyes covered her hearing is better and hears son watching her so she exposes more of herself openly masturbating in front of him. Mom has an accident and falls naked and has to call son for help, but after taking her to the ER she has a cast on her arm, and now needs even more hands on help. A follow up Doctor appt could lead to son picking out clothes helping her dress, go to the bathroom, bathing or showering, him getting an erection and poking her with it as he is washing her. So many options... please continue

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