All Comments on 'Temptation at the Movies'

by Lily

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great

Great story by another great author. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great Story

Excellent story, well written. I especially like it when an author keeps it to one or two "pages" and the story is complete, not awaiting more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Not much effort

Short and not worth spending the time reading... if you don't want to put more than 10 minutes into writing a story I don't understand why you bother posting it...

longwhitelongwhiteover 18 years ago
Another great story

Great story Lily - loved the urgency and desire, it really came over well. More soon?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
wish i was that younger man

god lily your stories turn me on. its a shame i'm 3000 miles away because i would love a weekend with my favorite author ; )

you're favorite younger man

TomorrowTodayTomorrowTodayover 12 years ago
Amazing

I can only pray this actually happened

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

You, you, you, you.... get an editor.

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