by Lily
Excellent story, well written. I especially like it when an author keeps it to one or two "pages" and the story is complete, not awaiting more chapters.
Short and not worth spending the time reading... if you don't want to put more than 10 minutes into writing a story I don't understand why you bother posting it...
Great story Lily - loved the urgency and desire, it really came over well. More soon?
god lily your stories turn me on. its a shame i'm 3000 miles away because i would love a weekend with my favorite author ; )
you're favorite younger man