All Comments on 'Temptations'

With scars that can be seen, but more that cannot. A love story quite different and refreshing. Thank you for an enjoyable read. More from you?

Thanks. tom anon

Lovely short story, thank you!

5*****s for Triple M.

But right up my alley. You write well and with style. Your characters are real people. Keep em comin.

one of your better stories.

Feel like I have just read one of the best stories I have read on this site. Please make note I said I which means me!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing.

Now add a few chapters and lrt em get rich have kids and grow old together

Nice story

Congratulations on a really neat, concise, believable story that can be used as a base for others. One of your best

I love it. I have a friend who used to be a dancer/waitress in one of those places, and from what she's told me about it your story seems really accurate. :) Nice to read something that doesn't shame those girls!

loved the way it evolved and so glad she got her man in the end and showing a bit of tit to earn money is just a bit of fun....one of the better stories.....loved it....

Very positive and cutely sexy.

Excellent story line and characters, the essence and boldness of life tied to what it takes to make it in life.

BRAVO!!

We get a good one.