All Comments on 'Temptation's Kiss Ch. 02'

Honestly your talented and I will constantly check back for more of your writings. Don't worry about mistakes they are natural. Keep writing cause you have it for sure. <3 this series!!!!!

Heyy there's no need to be so harsh. I didn't even notice and if your wrapped up in the story enough you shouldnt even notice. Plus since when have you ever read a published book that doesn't have 1 mistake. Even those that have been proof read 100s of times get printed with mistakes. Give the girl a break.

I really liked your story......

Keep writing you're doing a great job.

The 1960 Mustang is the glaring error, but there were several little glitches that detracted.

Overall not a bad story.

Mustangs were first built in 1963, 1960 models do not exist.