All Comments on 'Tempting Bait'

18 year old who takes an hour before erect again?

I was in military and stationed on Okinawa at 20 some of the guys had contests don't know all results wasn't all that interested but heard results one time

Winner went 10 times

After marriage told wife some stories for 40th birthday tried to see what I could do she quit after 6

As I know I am not superstud an hour Is ridiculous at 18 or he needs help

Nice story. Good characters. I'm not sure what is missing to take this story to the next level, but I guess I'm looking for more emotional involvement from him. He can be dumb and clueless for only so long. He keeps saying he needs to go with the flow, but I feel he is holding back. I'm interested in seeing where you take this. Maybe you will have him smarten up in the next chapter. Please keep writing. As my title states, this my two cents and only my opinion. Thanks for your time and imagination.

This submission was romantic? Not up close to your best for sure.

Seems a bit unrealistic, but who knows, either way would love to see a second xhapter

Where is the rest of the story? Please continue the story.

Good foundation for a polygamist romance. Since the mother is still rather young, they could live happily ever after, they have such an open relationship with everyone included. 4 years is not to long of a time to add a part two. heck he could have children with both of them (but let then finish college first)