All Comments on 'Tempus Fugitives'

"carrying thin brown satchels that identified them as Jehovah's Witnesses"

I think thats Mormons. JW's normally black bags but then this story is old so things could have changed.

Thanks for sharing

Would have given it -10 should have broken it up and cut out the long boring crap at the beginning YOU ARE NOT DAN BROWN

As usual, my work attracts negative comments from the 'anonymous' family who don't have the intelligence to get the point of this work. The boring crap at the beginning is the raison d'etre of this story. Life was boring because the people were denied the opportunity to think for themselves and enjoy life and sex and stuff, so my heroes decided to prevent the cause of their boredom. If Anonymous had read the Post Script he would have realised that after escaping death and arriving back in their boring world, they couldn't wait to get away again.

As for the JW's and brown satchels, on their last visit (about a month ago) they still had brown satchels. We don't get the Mormons here, we must be beyond redemption. CM

Absolutely BRILLIANT!! I love your writings CM. Don in Canada.

I think the story is great

Really liked the religious angle

What a great story. But all good things must end at some point. Thanks Cro for a wonderful story

As an old man who was raised by religious fanatics I enjoyed the many good points raised by those he brought from the back times to speak to the assembly. I, of course, am not a member of any organized religion and view most with cynicism. Thank you for writing and for giving us good thoughts.