All Comments on 'Ten Things to do in Vegas'

Good story! different.

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Great story.

Wow that was really intense. I was glad everything turned out wonderful for him after all he went through with his POS wife. 5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Good work!

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You do an excellent job of making unpleasant characters identifiable by their speech and actions. I like the mystery element of the story, too.

Loved this. A new favourite. Thank you.

Don't really get the point of killing off the two guys, as it certainly doesn't seem like there was much of a case there, and the judge would certainly be able to see that Eddie was competent. Not to mention that the hospital doctors could certify or testify to it as well, and that would be a normal part of such a process. It would also have been nice to have a little drive-by around his old life now that he's independently wealthy and remarried.

A great story, although I agree with SlithyTove that the 2 murders were unnecessary. 5 stars!

Fun story, loved how the lawyers for taken out. Now if we could only take out all the lawyers in Congress and DC. Five stars.

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