All Comments on 'Ten Years Have Got Behind'

by YDB95

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Super

A wonderful story! You did a surper job telling it aslo. I will now have to find more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Too many characters

Toomany people in the first few lines. Too confusing, gave up right there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Well done

apollo_XIapollo_XIabout 4 years ago
Nice balance

I really enjoyed the mix of heterosexual and homosexual relationships in this story. Definitely one of your better stories and I would definitely pick it to win the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Gay claptrap

That was difficult to get into and difficult to follow. Choppy writing style hurt the overall storyline. The awful characters hurt it worse. In the end you failed to capture my attention and failed to entertain.

1 star

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