All Comments on 'Ten Years Later'

by bullfrog1987

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Smiffy69Smiffy69over 2 years ago

I got lost in there somewhere and just couldn’t reconcile the first part with the latter. Sorry, but it’s a 2 from me.

Xavier3737Xavier3737about 1 year ago

I got lost and had no idea what was going and if it jumped to a completely different story. Just simply got lost!!!!!

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I use these stories to escape. Feedback is welcome, though I'm not looking for serious criticism as I know I my writing is not even amature at best and I write in forms of one person speaking, to another, to narration type. It's just a release for me to write.