by darkstone57
I agree it was different and the change in content was refreshing and well written, however the flow of the story when you were changing scenes was a bit abrupt...i don't know..it did not flow like your others, but anyway good read.
Well, this certainly is a different slice on romanticism. Romanticism with realism. I like it.
I'm tired of the everything is so perfect and they live happily ever after stories. This is what's it's all about, life as it is and as we actually experience it.
The twins were a nice touch, being that I have twins, too.
Good story. Thanks for the read.