All Comments on 'Tender Years'

He’s taking Algebra 102 in college? Kids learn algebra in junior high!

What other classes does he have? Learning Your ABCs 101? Nap Time 202? Hahaha.

I apologize for going off on such a stupid little thing, but it struck me as really strange and funny.

This has happened exactly like this in real life, more than twice. Great pace. Great everything! Fabulous story. I loved it! I better shut up now, before some smarty pants figures out what i might have rated this one.

hey, Anonymous...I didnt take Algebra until junior college and that was only because it was a required class. I couldnt figure it out in high school, so I dropped the class. I stumbled thru a beginning Algebra in my Freshman year, barely passed it and that satisfied the requirement. Now I'll grant you things were different in the 70's than they are now but I dont recall any of my kids needing Algebra to graduate high school, requirements were just a Math class of any kind....good story either way, Dark

Good believable story

Aw, how sweet, and really fun. Good tale.

One downer:

"I wanted to apologize, but I couldn't form coherent words. I guess Valerie had been in the process of getting ready to leave because she was standing in front of me in a black skirt with her blouse still in her hand. She was naked from the waist up except for a white lacy bra similar to the one she had been wearing the night we had been together. As if realizing she was half-naked Valerie suddenly lifted her shirt to cover her chest."

Is she naked or not naked? She's not naked. Maybe in a state of undress, but no, not naked. Overly wordy and it becomes confusing.

Algebra in college? BTDT. It is still a bitch and I use spreadsheets today like no other. Strange how it comes around and you do need it. Every once in awhile I pull out the college text to understand something new.

You know, you can solve women with algebra?!! Just kidding. That's IMPOSSIBLE!

Great story that will be near the top of my 'Favorites' list because Alex's first was much like my own right down to the exact details with the exception that her name was Cathy not Valerie. Thanks and keep the good work coming!

For the read.

The sex in every case was clouded by not knowing where Brad was at or when he may return Really killed the story

Thanks for another good story. Liked the characters and the story line. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Well done! Thank you for sharing this with us!

impressive pacing, plot and characterization and action.

the romantic and the erotic well blended

I enjoyed this story more than anything I have read lately

A tear fell down my cheek when Wade told Alex " Brad left town. I guess Valerie put her foot down"...what a true love affair story.

I really loved the story. Very well written, full of romance, love, sex, happiness. The best story I've read lately. 👍👏

Class, thanks for sharing.

Great story. A bit disturbing, but, love wins? Thank you.

(6/29/2023) Excellent work. Yes, love wins out. Reality would have had Alex move on with his life without Valeri and her two kids. But you decided otherwise. Thank you. Five stars and this goes on my list.