by Phallicwhale
One of the most detailed and fulfiling stories I read in a while. The woman's slightest aggression, the guy setting things up. Wow!
This was t he best story I have read in a long time. Look forward to reading more of your work
Very well-written. Both the tennis game and the sexual acts were really well described. The one flaw though is the bringing them together. I felt that the scene where Lita is suddenly on her knees holding and then sucking his cock was a bit far-fetched and not in keeping with the story nor characters hitherto.
Also:
"She could already feel her honey beginning to flow, and although she would always prefer to face her partner during sex."
How does she have a preference for facing her partner when she has never had sex before?