All Comments on 'Tennis Anyone'

by Phallicwhale

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AzuldrgonAzuldrgonalmost 17 years ago
Very hott read.

One of the most detailed and fulfiling stories I read in a while. The woman's slightest aggression, the guy setting things up. Wow!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Fantastic

This was t he best story I have read in a long time. Look forward to reading more of your work

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Decent story

Very well-written. Both the tennis game and the sexual acts were really well described. The one flaw though is the bringing them together. I felt that the scene where Lita is suddenly on her knees holding and then sucking his cock was a bit far-fetched and not in keeping with the story nor characters hitherto.

Also:

"She could already feel her honey beginning to flow, and although she would always prefer to face her partner during sex."

How does she have a preference for facing her partner when she has never had sex before?

roveroneroveroneover 5 years ago
Loved it...

Great 1st time for her -5

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