All Comments on 'Tennis Slut'

do more like this hurry

No context, no build up, no suspense, no charcters, just cut and paste body parts being shoved into each other!

needs work but good plot. Work on the build up and develope the characters. The sex is good though. Keep working on this story line.

This story has a good basis and plot. With a little work it could be a "1000" out of a possible "100". You need to get your writing mentality out of your little head and back into the head on your shoulders.

Incase the negative people dont know...women are like this. They dont care about anyone else except them selves and will do what they think is right for them. To bad guys have to learn this the hard way...but if you havent learned it, count yourself lucky and live without asking too many questions. :P