All Comments on 'Tepin's Muse: Hetero Edition'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow!

DAMN you're good!

I very much appreciate the romance, affection, and limited communication between the Valbara'nay and Krell, and understanding more than the protagonist ( due to reading Highway to Krell, amongst others) for the courting phase was fascinating. You do an excellent job of exploring both cultures without simply adding a human observer to give exposition and the like.

TLB1981TLB1981over 4 years ago

What's coming up next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I much enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great stuff

Really enjoyed the story can you write a story about a male Valbaran and female Borealan too would love to see it?

YellowcutieYellowcutieover 4 years ago
Love it

You earned a new fan! Now I know a small penis and a really big mouth is a great combination haha... Please make something like this again. Maybe a She-Venom coming across 18 y.o male would be great??

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Amazing!!! Love your plot and creativity

Such realistic descriptions! Masterfully written, and very erotic

ArtemisjbArtemisjbabout 3 years ago
More please

This is officially my favorite out of all of your stories. I loved getting to see things from Tepin's perspective. I hope that you will write a sequel. There is so much more here that can be explored. Tepin's giant apartment would be downright cozy for Theesa. How will people (in each of the races) react to Tepin's art and his worship of the Krell? Maybe he can open an art studio and sell his work. Could the Krell translators come into play at some point? Maybe Tepin and Theesa could double date with Sleeth and Lena. How will Tepin interact with Equatorials?

There is just so much more to explore. Please continue this story!

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