All Comments on 'Tequila's Eve'

Excellent !

Very nicely done. I really enjoy the way you write. It brings out the personality of your characters so well, makes the story more believable. Of course, it doesn't' hurt that being Eve could be one of my personals fantasies. Hoping for a chapter 2.

There are a couple of unanswered questions after all.

Beyond Five Stars

That was an Amazing story! It did an excellent job of seeing into the mindset of a hopeful Questioning2Questioning friends-to-lovers tale, especially the mindset of the Narrator MC. Capturing the clusterfuck of thoughts and emotions that goes through the head of a new CD/TF trying to navigate a romantic minefield like this is beyond difficult (probably because we didn't know what the hell we were feeling ourselves lol). This does definitely leave room for "where do things go from here", which I for one would love to read (as long as it's romantic, and not just another sub-space degradation fest like some series turn into.) Well done! This girl is absolutely a new fan : )

I write professionally and can think of no way to improve it

This was a great read!! It kept my attention the whole time!! Please continue this story!!

This is the best Literotica story ever! God, I came hard over this!

Fantastic!

Awesome story .. that is just how I feel around my boyfriend .. almost like Eve, but first he eats me out licking and sucking my clit while he fingers me with fingers as big as my thumb .. leaving me floating in a warm warm haze .. then I lick and suck and swallow until he is breathless and we both need a rest before he fucks me senseless ..

The mental deliciousness that I love about fucking someone or being fucked by someone came through to me merely by reading your story. Your writing caused me to have pre cum oozing without a touch.

Very easy to get absorbed into the story. I felt like I was Evan/Eve! Great writing..