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jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 8 years ago
alright

for the most part I really enjoyed this story, the only part I though should have been different was on the first page half way down, no matter how nice they were, the spanking should have been left out, but that is my opinion

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Excellent Confrontation

Excellent plot and looking forward to the next meeting with Barbara and possibly Rhonda!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good story

Good story, I think the fighting part could be more

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