by obo
I JUST LOVED IT! this story is very nice please make part 2 of it. Your submission is amazing.
Read some of your stories the build up’s are really sexy, especially the description of the clothing and their eventual undoing. If Iwas you I would add some more and different characters.
A good Example would be young vs old, or rich vs poor , pretty vs ugly. Best villain is by far Teresa and as a side note add lots of lesbian n/c. Sex
Hope this helps
Please write some more
Thanks
I first want to say welcome back OBO. It was a long time between stories. This one was hard to read at the beginning. A very small percentage of people follow horses and using words and terms we dont understand makes it hard to picture in our minds. However the encounter between Barbara and Teresa was five stars , You still can write so well that I can see the whole thing in my mind and got extremely aroused. Keep up the good work!