by KenNicottii
Well written, nice easy to read flow and yet had my attention pretty much throughout.
BRAVO!!
A truly fine piece of storytelling... and wonderfully crafted. As an aside, comments about undue length are a curiosity to me. A story takes as long as a story takes, and I'm not aware of any strictures as to length on Literotica.
Please don't leave it there. Characters were likeable, and engaging. Good base for moving to romance.
This was a very easy rating to give. The story was excellent and very well done!! A few grammatical errors, but I got past them because the story was so compelling. Great job! I hope Tanja is OK.
The characters were believable, not perfect humans. I particularly liked the instructional lessons, the fine detail of pleasure.
Info from a pedant who loved the story:
For clarity's sake, Biphetamine was a mixture of amphetamine salts and (for practical purposes) the same as Adderall.
I really enjoyed the fresh story plot, quite unusual for Lit. And this is a very good story telling and writing.