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SW_MO_HermitSW_MO_Hermitabout 11 years ago
Fantastic

Only near the end of our lives do we find (if we're lucky) that which makes us truly happy. You took two lonely people in the twilight of their lives, combined, stirred with the essence of their sister's love and came up with a truly touching beautiful story. Well done. It took a sentence of death to make Mandy understand what she had done to herself and to see the bad choice she made in a mate but in the end she found what she truly deserved. She learned what was truly important in life and obtained it. You allowed her to change from a selfish career driven woman to one who found and embraced that which was truly important in life. You allowed her dignity in death and gave her a wonderful place to rest for eternity. In the end all that is important is love and compassion.

Very well done. You made tears seep out of this old man's eyes when he got to the last page of this remarkable story.

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