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dauberdauberover 5 years ago
Nicely done

Cannot wait to read the next chapter. Is Michael unattached? Is Angela unattached?

Dray26Dray26over 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

Angela isn’t wearing a ring and I also neglected to give Michael’s status. Chapter 2 was submitted and should be published by 8/27, and a little bit will be revealed at that time. I will make sure to share their status in part 3. Feel free to make a suggestion since it’s still tbd in my mind. Thanks

Dray26Dray26over 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks Dauber!

Angela has no wedding ring, but we don't yet know if she's in a relationship. I didn't share any background on the characters yet, and part 2 won't either since it was already submitted and should be posted by 8/27. I'm not sure what part 3 will bring but am open to suggestions. Thanks for reading!

arrowglassarrowglassover 5 years ago
You certainly have piqued my interest!

.........more please!

Sxualchocol8Sxualchocol8over 5 years ago
Ooh..

Go get 'em, Michael!!! Hot damn!

Good read; nice teaser. Hopefully, some juicy revenge for Angela, and a trip to HR (for the drive) will take the wings off of that SOB, and Michael gets the girl. (Why, yes, I am a hopeless, yet vindictive romantic, thank you.)

Great job, Dray. Please keep plugging away.

Sc8

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