by AwkwardMD
I really liked this chapter, but it wasn't quite as funny as the previous one. Can't wait for the next.
It was funny like the rest, not to mention well written. The wordplay is fantastic and the dialogue, incredible. Waiting for the next.
Val is much more likable in this chapter. Probably because some of her vulnerabilities are revealed. The sex between Val and Ayen was hot. It was nice to see his conceited ass get dominated and claimed by Val. But, now that he knows that Val (in a sense) is a virgin, Ayen will have a new, or at least another White Whale. Ayen comes across as more likable too.
Poor Val! It was really great of Ayen to show care and concern here. It's like he had some personal growth, and he's become attached to his new friends in a meaningful way. Loved that. And the Val and Ayen sex was really hot! :)