All Comments on 'Terror in the Snowstorm Ch. 02'

good story, both chapters. hope you continue it.

This has really developed into a complex and amazing story. I like the way you've handled the plot complications, and the sex is wonderful - never OTT, but realistic and satisfying. Thank you for a great read.

The dialog is kind of clunky, but I like the way things are moving along.

Nice transitioning of the story. Chapter one was intense, but you brought it around nicely. I like what you are doing with the characters. Great erotic play also. Hooked into reading the rest, now.

I like the premise of your stories, but what ultimately makes me give up on them is the fact that your character talk in paragraphs. It feels very unnatural to me.

This could have been a SENSATIONAL story but rushed to sex, it burned like the wretched cabin.

Still very good but like the previous comment has it, the sex occurred too soon. 5*s, nonetheless.

Well that was a quick recovery for Tara and a massive switch. A bit too soon for me