by ozland234
I'm so glad you've submitted again. Your writting is enthralling and it was too long between WITM and this.
Thank you
Also- You don't have to be a Christian to appreciate good writting or romance.
I have to admit I am a total atheist but in spite of that I still really enjoyed your story. I have to plead guilty about filtering out some of the religious phrasing whilst reading it but it didn't detract in any way from the story. It's a really good romantic read. Very impressed!
I cried a bit reading this story guess because in the deepest corner of my heart I hope Jesus and God will send me such a good man.
THIS....WAS.....GREAT.......!!!!!!!!! wonderful story! it hit me in so many ways! I laughed, I cried and I felt for the heroine! Thanks for this wonderful story
the connection between these 2 had me crying, laughing and wishing my husband was at home, many thanks for reminding me just how wonderful married life can be x
Really nice story. How the love can change the people.
Maybe (I`m Christen) is a little recurrent about the religion, but I understand that`s necessary in this story.
Very good Job!
5* for you!
There a couple nice things about religion but it is a shame that it all comes wrapped up with control, lies, and ignorance.
Regardless, waiting until after marriage before reveiling all to a spouse I think is a bad idea. I have known first hand too many couples who waited and discovered incompatibility after the fact. Religion doesn't have all the answers, or even most and it rarely has good answers. Good morals, ethics, and concern for others will serve much better than taking the word of people thousands of years dead, mistranslated beliefs in imaginary friends. We medicate children who keep imaginary friends too long.
This was an entertaining story otherwise
This was a very good story. My song for them would be this: "Nothing's Gonna Change My Love For You" by Glenn Medeiros (the original was by George Benson, but this cover version is better IMO...)
Just open YouTube in another window and play this song in the background while you read the story...
5+
People who are not Christians cannot understand! When two Christians get married they know they have the perfect mate as a gift from God. Knowing hat makes it work perfectly. My wife each had our first "sex" on our honeymoon, and it just got better and better for 53 years. In Jesus God teaches us the meaning of perfect unselfish love. The daily goal is to do everyth8ng to make things as perfect as possible for one's mate. My body is to be used to bring perfect pleasure to my wife and vice versa. It is a beautiful way to live.
Sadly this ignorant (without knowing) comment is too common: " I have known first hand too many couples who waited and discovered incompatibility after the fact."