All Comments on 'Tessa And Tom, Two Of A Kind Ch. 01'

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wax_wingswax_wingsalmost 11 years ago
Great start!

Looking forward to future chapters. Not too many mistakes, but I would suggest working on the flow of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nice!!!

I liked it, Also looking forward to more!!! :)

TernomTernomalmost 11 years ago

I like it! Definitely looking forward to more.

Especially as Tom is now defenceless :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Right up with succubus summoning

Nice!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good story but a bit short

Good story but a bit short, work on the flow and natural speaking more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
dull

Dry, no emotion whatsoever. The person who wrote this story seems to have a thing for thrust-till-you-cum sex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A bit late

It should be 'Tom hires a prostitute', just thought you should know.

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