by Isopropyl
But I loved it. Don't ask me why but I just did. Kinda like a guilty pleasure movie or TV show that we all have. Glad he got rid of the penis extinction and got an extension. When he lost it in his mom, would have been funnier if it was in her ass... especially seeing it was a "pain in the ass to get out." Steve.
Average, I liked the content but have a hard time with the spelling and punctuation.
the content was somewhat humorous. some of the misspellings where quite funny, "penis extinction"? is that supposed to be the eradication of all males on the planet?
Someone indeed needs to do it ,this was entertaining BUT it could have been so hot.
The spelling and punctuation was horrendous but I liked the idea of the story. It really could have been a whole lot better if it was a story of detailed examples of the toys being used; where as this was just an overview of everything without much detail. That's the kind of job I'd love to do for the rest of my life! I'd love to know how to get into that!
I think this story could be longer as a bro/sis story. You could show the thoughts they have and them getting use to the idea of getting the job to make ends meat and doing all the testing and research together. So having more detail around the using and testing of products.
out of testing out sex toys? Ya, right... lol A little more uummph to it would've been good though... it was kind of sterile, the way you just kind of listed off a random day.