by mistyrydher
GREAT WRITING AS WE ALL KNOW A LITTLE S & M NEVER SHOULD HURT TOO MUCH . JUST ENOUGH TO LEAVE A LASTING EMPRESSION .I KNOW GUYS LIKE A LITTLE AS WELL AS THERE WIVES. george1956
Great writing! Love the story and the love between the characters. Please continue it.
Please keep writing. I want to know what happens next. The story is just beginning to unfold. Please don't make us beg for more....
Misty you are a great writer..I enjoy your stories very much so much feeling and thought put into it
You have a gift of talent! Never stop writing! This is a wonderful story, had me on the edge during the whole read.
I wanted to thank you because your wonderful story really made my day.
Your AWSOME story is going to help me show my sweet husband what I've been wanting!!! You are changing the world 1 reader at a time, what more can a writer ask for? THANK YOU AGAIN!!!
What a great way to introduce a new game plan to the bedroom .... I'd just like to say that has inspired me to something very similar, thanks for the heads up.
Love to see a squeal .... I did enjoy the first one so much
cheers :)
You are a very good writer! I enjoyed it greatly! Keep it up I would love to see you continue with their journey!!
I can only dream it will happen to me some day. Thank you for a lovely story. Thank you not only for a good story, but well written.
I loved the build up in her, how she (you) submitted, then became so turned on, with an incredible orgasm
I became worried about this when he thought just demanding things is an acceptable way to introduce a newbie to domination an submission but was pleasantly surprised what I loved the most an is lacking in other stories is how much he adores his wife an appreciates her submission. I did think the punishment was too harsh for a total newbie that would of scared me off an possibly caused me to stop the whole thing it needed to be less harsh. But good story
Yes, he might love her, but you do not treat or punish a slave like he did. That is not very loving, at all. When u care for someone, u mean and really care for them. He doesn’t.