by __Lisa__
5 stars, I'd award you more, but can't. This story is definitely a love story from a woman's perspective. So many times, we read erotic stories about couples where all the thoughts and feelings tend to be more masculine rather than feminine. It's refreshing to read a story where her POV is explored.
I appreciate that you describe the sex and orgasms and the realistic noises people make instead of non-stop screaming, announcing and screaming through orgasms, and giving every character seizures by rolling their eyes to the backs of their heads. You accomplish more in two short pages than most writers do with their whole catalogue.
I love these two can you please do some more stories please please please
Can we please have another chapter on then celebrating please as it’s so unfinished my imagination can’t take no more
Fantastic wish it went on a bit more and also wish when they were in the pool she dived down to pull his shorts off and maybe suck him there
The exchange:
He's a cop
So?
He has a gun.
Made me burst out laughing. A+ story.
Short ,very sweet and very hot!
And very well written-if I were grading it I'd give it an A/A.
Instead will give it 5, and going back for your H/E/W.
Omg, how many of us have experienced a lust for a boy like that? Only to have it fizzle away with time. :( This story was so well-paced, so erotic and so real, and the ending contained a release I not only needed but craved...thanks so much! New fave author!
Stacy
Loved it. Especially when long suppressed lust finally boils to the top.
You tell 'em so well.