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Anonymousalmost 9 years agoLearn to write or
get someone to edit your outpourings into English, and get rid of the myriad errors!!
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoGreat start
Keep them 'chasing/flirting' for awhile. Also, don't pay attention to the person that critiqued your writing style. I'm always amazed at how people that have never posted on here are so quick to criticize.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoShe couldn't help herself. The way he laughed, blue twinkles in his eyes, his he way he laughed, and blue twinkles in his eyes, his massive.....
I read the comments after reading the tag line for this story, then started to read and the first anon comment was right. I stopped reading after the first paragraph. Did you even proof read yourself?
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