by FINC
oh, you are good. so demented, so degrading, so humilating. so...makes me want to start riding buses.
superb .. u dirty bastard , loved it plz write more ..u have a gift
I love you kinky mind...keep up the great work. Would love to be under your spell, being embarrassed, humiliated and with no relief in site except wonderful orgasms.
I have to admit, this series of stories has to be one of the hottest ones i have read in a long while. Not sure exactly, maybe its the taboo and disgusting "family", but have to admit i am and have quite enjoyed this one a lot. Excellent story as well, well written and easy to read.
Well done and thanks for posting.
Points for creativity, but this series reads as if it was written by a teenager. Half of the metaphors and descriptions distract from the story. Finally, for the love of god, use commas!