All Comments on 'TFAM - The Magic Touch Ch. 01'

Very well done, thank you! Amazing job for your first story. 5 stars.

Anyway, after reading the story I formed my thoughts and perspective on TFAM. In my mind, it seems like TFAM is a mix of empathy/telepathy based on touch, with a bit of telekinesis thrown in.

Looking forward to a next chapter!

A good read thank you for sharing your work, Looking forward to more chapters!

DDD on a 155cm frame? That's not nice, that's grotesque.

A bit longwinded. So, will await the follow up

The funny part about fiction is that it is often rooted in truth. Those measurements are roughly accurate. I know for certain that the bra size is accurate.

i rather enjoyed it, it was delightful to see you build up both characters. clearly you stay inside one head, but the schtick allows us to see into Candy's as well, which is well done!

Enjoyed the read. Keep up the good work

Excellent first shot. A bit slow developing, but you're not just introducing characters, you're trying to introduce a character and concept you can develop. Well done, and I'll be interested to see where this goes next.

Great start. Keep it up!