All Comments on 'Thank God For Car Break Downs Ch. 01'

You said they took off their clothes at the restaraunt, then Alicia was wearing tight pants. Which is it?

Oops! I did not catch that! Thank you! This was a role play between a guy and I and I never caught that mistake. I will do better next time if I do another role play with a guy.

The change from it initially being "he" to then being "I" and then sometimes back again is frustrating.

And then the writing just got too silly too early. I gave up just after she exposed her tits.

Quite a horny interlude... maybe car break downs are not so bad after all!

..spoiled by grammatical errors. It badly needs editing.

Brad sounds like a sexy young man? Why does he shave the body hair? A young man with a bit of body hair can be sooooo sexy -- both to look at and to taste and touch!

Reading this one made me hard. I can't wait to read more from you.

-Joe-