All Comments on 'Thank You Jeannie Ch. 09-10'

This is a realistic story of love between young, teen-age relatives. I know from my experience with my cousin.

The thanks Jeanie story so far is very erotic and well writen. Made me extremily horny and aroused. The auther is very talented as a writer.

Now that's how you write an EROTIC story

this is one of the best stories i have ever read on here good charecters good plot and amazing sex sceanes will have to find time to read the big story at some point

Never seen the term "slow comfortable screw" more aptly described. Been there a few times myself. Nothing can compare. Nice work Bill.

It made me feel as though I was there enjoying the sex myself. What a wonderful feeling

Thank you for one of the most erotic stories I have ever read , haven't missed a single word nor feeling .... I'm exausted......

You write much the way we experienced it. We weren't as sophisticated, but enjoyed many of the same closeness and joy in sharing our bodies with each other 55 years ago

This faggot is padding his ratings. Also he have different name logging and marked most of his trash as a favorite. Dishonesty of this shithead is staggering. Always vote 1* to this fag ravings!

No surprise that you write your vitriol as anonymous. Only a complete coward writes such crap and won't sign their name to it. It is a great and well written story buy one of this sites best writers.

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This was a long awaited and tender time for the pair and you wrote it well.

I'm wondering if they can introduce the cousin into the mix or if that would come between them...

Ramjet

Kinda sad that it seems like they are giving up on the idea of staying together longterm, hopefully that will change in future chapters.

shrt

Hands down the most well written story i have come across on this site. Erotic, captivating, grammer was perfect, which for me is essential. . Hope i find more content by you. Bravo

You should have given some thought to the smell of sex. No way the parents wouldn't smell it, the car would be reeking of it.

This was much better than chapters 7 and 8, but I agree that the idea of the parents not seeing them or not smelling the sex smells is unrealistic. Also falling asleep in the back while still entangled will get them caught for sure.

i'd like to se where