All Comments on 'Thanks, Mom.'

So beautiful she does not play any games.

She must become your woman and take it deep into her pussy. She is still young enough to give you a baby or two!

the story concept was good but next time try using an outline before you start writing, example in one paragraph she has a landing strip and in another its bald, in one you are fucking her ass and in the very next she is in a different position on the bed and you are standing ramming her pussy, and in the next you both jump off the bed......

It's always the alcohol in incest stories. someones gotta be drunk before they make a move.oh well great writing atleast.

Too quick. If you wanted to write a short fuck story, you accomplished that. If you want to write a story with characters and emotions, you will need to put forth more effort. Thanks for your time and efforts.

Drunk sex is stupid and I'm not even close to being Bi much less gay like you author.

Mom needs his cum in her pussy. Hopefully she'll soon show the world a baby bump

contrived. Not even jerk-off worthy.

Okay so to answer a couple questions.

The target was in fact a short story, I wanted to try something with a little less depth, and I tried to jump right into action this time, without having a time consuming build up.

And yeah with the pubic hair situation, that was a mistake that slipped past editing, so for that I apologize.

For the ‘Anonymous’ user that complained about hating the drunken sex and anal, I apologize to you too. I wrote that in to appease those who DO enjoy drunken sex, and anal sex.

And no, I’m not gay. If I was gay I would write gay porn. So, uh, yeah.

Thanks for all the comments. I take EVERY comment as a way to improve myself, so, again, thank you all so much,

Short and sweet. Neither of them ever showed any sexual interest in the other before. Huh, who'd a thunked.

hot.