All Comments on 'Thanksgiving Game Goes Awry'

Wow, I couldn't even be mad at the siblings by the end, Sierra and he actually fit together very well. That ending up being quite a wholesome ending...and he gets the kids he wanted as well! Will we get a followup story or epilogue on their 'pretending' and her finishing NYU and making babies?

But this one pretty much hit all the right notes for me to give 5 stars. Well written, nothing pulled me out of the story. Great job!

Another great story, Spector_Dugan. Well played from start to finish. Good involved creative fantasy well plotted and presented. Five stars in my book I always look forward to one of your offerings. Hope you get as much pleasure from writing them as we, your fans get reading them.

Cheers

SAGE

Wow, SD! Just awesome!

That was really good, thank you for sharing your thoughts and time with us all. I rather like that it shows both the fun and dark side of how things can go.

Cuckold porn :(

Wow, incredible story, 5/5

Typically I really enjoy your stories. The writing as always was really well done but I couldn’t bring myself to like the characters. I won’t rate just because the story wasn’t for me doesn’t mean others won’t love it.

Super hot, extremely well written.

As always, great work. Could have used a once over before publication, but not enough to distract.

You're one of the few authors I find the way to 5 stars, and you never disappoint.

the sports handling line was weird as hell but overall not bad

Excellent!

I loved this story. You showed such self control and restraint and yet kept me involved and titillated. Actually you keep me turned on. I can’t wait to read your other stories.

Liked your story and gave it 5* but the ending wasn't for me. He loved his wife and shared a close connection with her but then they divorced. Why does he think it's going to be any different with this new girl? Bad ending in my opinion. It's an incest story but let's drop that part at the end and say who cares about those characters. Eye roll... I almost gave it 3* just because of the last several paragraphs.

Someone else who roots for the Lions? Hell yeah!

Also, masterfully written. As always. It had a good ending.

Slow start, but omg, what a finish. And the reality that the Thanksgiving escapade led to the dissolution of the marriage rings true. Five-plus rating all the way.

Extremely well written tale with slow character development driven by a complex, intertwining plot lines. The only small shortcoming I saw was the joining of Becky and Joey, Sierra and Drew. I would have liked a little more detail of what Drew was thinking as he watched the two start to mate. You left us bread crumbs, but a sentence or two that he acknowledged as he watched his marriage had ended. Minor point, I get it, but I felt the collapse of a marriage deserved a bit more. 5*

Good build up, great finish

Great story and well written. Great reveal by girl friend about true desire.

I liked this one, though I think you could have spent more time getting into the emotional aspect of why the marriage failed and how Drew felt watching his wife fuck her brother. It just sort of happened to him. That said, it was well-written, hot, and flowed really well. Great job!

Excellent story, well-written. One of the best I've seen on the site. 5*

Great story, I like the out side of the family perspective. Thanks for submitting.

I just emailed the administrators of the site to request more stars for this story! While there were a handful of typos this is arguably the best story I’ve read on this site. So patiently written, a two year build-up and a payoff to match. The setting, dialogue, and reactions were so honest and true it made the story even hotter. Well done!

As always very well written. Been away for a while but had to come back and check the new work. Great build up. Crazy dynamic. Have to admit the abrupt divorce/ending wasn’t for me but I’m not going to let the last half dozen paragraphs ruin a clear 5 star story. Just like any other story, we are gonna like the whole store, hate the whole story, or find ourselves somewhere in between. I think it’s great when an author can do that. Make me enjoy some things and not others.

The visual of the father-in-law watching the game while at a sex party made me laugh. Nice addition.

I like that you told a different story than most of your others, even though I couldn’t appreciate all aspects of it. It’s good to stretch your themes a little bit. Good story.

Great story. The slow build up, the troubled marriage, the thanksgiving game playing. It's all very well done. I would have liked a little more about the actual breakup of the two couples, maybe a dialogue scene where the husband and wife talk about splitting up, and she talks about her brother's role in her life. But as the story stands it is terrific.

A cute, bittersweet story. More angst than I typically go for, but well done angst. Also, "Her labia trim and tight. Like they were keeping a secret." is probably the best turn of phrase I have come across in any erotica ever.

Very enjoyable story with a real ending. Just by itself, the comment that he was no longer married rescued 3 stars for a 5 star 🌟 ending.

Few distracting typos & errors show the poor writers that it can be done in free stories.

Bill

You truly have a gift for this! I enjoy your stories immensely! Hardly needs to. Be said, but another 5Star winner. Glad they broke up and didn’t do the dumbest thing humans do….have a baby to “save” the marriage. Nothing like bringing a new born child into a loveless house.

But, as is typical, you are smarter than that!

Thank you again for sharing your genius with us!

Al

A great story and very well written - Thank you

Great storytelling. You have to wonder, what is it with incest that it translates into such a degree of primal, almost animalistic sex on the page.

I personally didn't like the ending...kinda-sorta cuckolding and ruined marriage. Up until that part the story was great though.

HOT, HOT, HOT! Great slow but steady build up and everyone obviously got what they wanted in the end. My pork was hard the entire read after page 3. Loved it!!!!! Absolutely 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!

"You think they're having Thanksgiving dinner with each other right now?" Sierra asked.

"Honestly? I don't give a fuck," I said, "I'm just glad I get to be with you. At least for a little while."

- Damned right here shouldn't care. *He* loved *her*... clearly, she decided she no longer loved him...

the ending ruins it

The ending was great!

This story is a dark ride, but I liked it

It was pretty good except for the destruction of the marriage thing. I totally had to take 2 points off for that one. 3/5

Normally I don't like stories where there is cheating among the Mac's but this was done really well. I loved the "tryptophan for the win!" Brilliant.

Great story. A fun read.

I’m not crazy about the abrupt turn into the divorce lane. However, that’s a personal preference and has no bearing on whether the story was told well.

No deductions from my rating.

I doubt their relationship will survive. Not the sibling one btw

Great story! Loved the ending too.

Loved it, great work. Some typos here and there but great overall. Wish we got an updated on the siblings. Maybe a better twist would've been Sierra saying "I have a brother" at the end haha

5 stars plus.

Fantastic new story. Great masturbation tale as are many of this authors. And a proper ending too!

Bill S.

Great story you’ll love to hear about Joey and Becky’s life after that thanksgiving

Double thumbs up! Enjoyed immensely. Keep writing these kind of stories for us.

Well that was not what I expected, great storey though. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

has a touch of reality that i like in a story,,enjoyed it,,,i hate small titted women,,i was married to one for a while,,i think she felt inadequate so thats why she cheated,, a lot i found out later,,

Fucking fantastic! Spector, you never disappoint!

The signs were there. Their marriage was dying. The wife had all but given up. Every time he tried, she just brushed it off because really she didn't want to try any more. I think deep down she knew she had feelings for her brother, and then when given the right opportunity, it all came out (let's be honest, the way she brushed off all of the comments, it was obvious how she felt and hoped Joey felt). I guess in the end it all worked out.

The thing that really bugs me though is why she didn't communicate with her husband better instead of just brushing off everything. That's kind of a shitty thing to do to the person that is meant to be your partner in life. I felt bad for Drew. He handled it well although only because he got Sierra; I think he would have been heartbroken and angry if that wasn't the case. Don't jump into a marriage when you don't really know the other person, especially if they have gaps in their past they're not willing to share or their sexual appetite isn't what you're after; otherwise, it's just a divorce waiting to happen.

OMG! What a story, the 1st I've seen on this site and soo HOT.

You’re my favorite actor on the site SD, but this caused me physical pain. I won’t rate it because that feels somewhat petty and I’m sure this will do it for others. I’ll just never understand or appreciate the appeal of cheating partners in stories like these

Incest siblings their a gross pair lol. Wife was a worthless that cunt is for the streets and her brother sounds like a bottom bitch. Drew and Sierra are adorable and real men love women with real curves that bitch is sexy.

A real beautiful story on this site. I am a regular watcher here, but this story striked me to be beautiful. There was not any extreme waste of time, the feelings were portrayed beautifully, it was awesome. I also loved how no character got blamed on, all of them are human afterall. It was consensual and responsible and also hot at the same time. Real good work. One of the best.

A real beautiful story on this site. I am a regular watcher here, but this story striked me to be beautiful. There was not any extreme waste of time, the feelings were portrayed beautifully, it was awesome. I also loved how no character got blamed on, all of them are human afterall. It was consensual and responsible and also hot at the same time. Real good work. One of the best.

I thought it was a fantastic story with something so many stories have a hard time with. A proper ending.

5 stars...again...you sick bastard 😉