by antix
Your description made me so hot - I wish I was that girl.
You totally got me off in multiples, can't stop tingling. I think it's the pace of the description - not too rushed.
Gotta go clean myself up.
Oh my god, nice job.
What memory that must be.
Will you please write again? You have an authentic touch -- this one was awesome, and I bet your next one will be, too.
Just stay real and down to earth, and tell a good story.
Nice job, man!
Agree with other comments- very real, had the desired effect for me!!
Please write more!
well it coulve been me.... I did this with dozens of strangers at concerts...its why i went to the moshpit!