All Comments on 'That First Spark'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Beautifully Written

Exquisite! I look forward to more. Please don't make us wait too long.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
This is incredible

The only thing wrong with it is that it isn't more highly rated by readers. This is some of the best I've read in a long time. Well done.

NC22371NC22371over 9 years ago
2 S's....

Short, but sensual

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Yummy...

Please continue this story, there is so much possibility!

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