All Comments on 'That Friend from College Pt. 01'

Felt more like erotic couplings to me

It was okay and headed toward a 4 until you didn't finish, it immediately dropped to a 3.

This is just the first part of a multi-part story. There is a lot more to come.

super duper intro. Hope their journey is happy! waiting for more

How is the music coming, jack?

Dear exhausted in MY:

This is a great story. It is the first story of yours I have read. I will now read more.

I am grateful.

I think Allison and Pete made the right decision to go from friends to something more.

You write very well and your story line is wonderful. I liked introduction of Ben as a the curious younger brother.

Best regards,

Potential fan in YYZ.

Pete needs to be wary about the younger brother.

That was a good start. I’m wondering why, after Pete said he wanted to be more than friends, that neither of them asked the other whether it was a one night stand? I mean, by the time they reached her house, he might have asked her for a date.