All Comments on 'That Sinking Feeling'

Not a fan of 2pg short stories, Thanks for this story. Rated 5/5

Really enjoyed your story. I was hard all the way through it. The sinkhole was written into this very well. I don't recall hearing about a sinkhole in these stories before.

That was an incredibly amazing story. I always enjoy reading about a son,wife and mother threesome.

Such a loving wife. Mom wanted me to find one like her.

Fantastic read, enjoyed it very much.

Loved this story. I so wanted to fuck my mother,it was always a dream of mine.one night while my wife was sucking my cock she looked at me and asked me if I ever wanted my mother and my answer was to explode all over her face. She laughed and said wow I guess so. After that she would tease me and tell me how mommy wanted me and to come fuck mommy. This story was my fantasy!

I liked this story for several reasons. I was getting a blow job from my wife one night in our family room facing the tv with a video playing. It was a video of a guy and his MIL. She was giving him a blow job too. My wife stopped her sucking and turned to watch. Then she said something that blew my mind. She said, "Do you want my mother to finish you?" I nodded and started talking to her mom as she sucked me dry and I exploded in her mouth. After she was cleaned up she said now we know what to do when you're having trouble cuming!

Very good stuff. Definitely write sequel about the shower and more x

A story about a guy in a threesome with his wife and mom? That's at least a four-alarm fire.

;)

This was probably the best story I have read in years. The content is just great and the sequel potential is unlimited. Thank you so much.

You made it seem natural and that is good writing. You captured the naughtiness of Jacinta perfectly.

Loved the story! Just glad that you didn't continue it by describing the pee fun in the shower. That would have ruined it for me.

Would love to see more as they wait for the city to come thru with enough money to buy a new house big enough for all of them.

LOVE! Great job. 😊

I’ve often said that the hallmark of a good incest story isn’t who is fucking whom, but the long slow burn that leads the family members to crossing the uncrossable line. In this case, he had his dutiful wife greasing the skids for him. The story was beautifully written and flowed naturally, and the sex was not overdone. I was disappointed though that it ended when it did, as I’m a fan of water sports. Gave this 5*s gladly.

wow great exciting story. you made a very taboo thing seem natural & highly erotic. hope to read more of this tale thanks

Great story. Very well written! Would love to see it continue.

Sunburycd, You are one of my favorite authors! This is a great example of your excellent work! Good character development, nice build up, and an explosive climax(pun intended) ! Five stars and favorited!

P.S. It's beyond me why people read incest stories and then complain about incest!

great tease, well written, i like the humor at the beginning. well done!!

So well written. I love how Alex is ambivalent throughout, while Jacinta knows exactly what's coming, and Kathy is a willing co-conspirator. The sex is beautiful. Clearly all 3 love each other deeply, and will continue to express that sexually.

i wanna fuck your mom too man after reading the story. motherfuckingly erootic.

These are my favorite kind of stories and there don't seem to be too many of them. Unfortunately, it is similar to one that I've been working on so I'll have to change mine, but please continue!

hands down top 10 story of all time

I wish there were more than five stars to be handed out. This story deserves seven or eight. I hope you will write many more episodes in this story or more stories in this vein - fabulous.

That was awesome, good enough for me to leave my first ever comment.

Would love to see a second part with watersports and watching them pee on the toilet. Also would of liked the mother to try on the too small bras and squeeze into them. Keep up the great work!

... one of your best. I loved it. Too short though. I thought mom and DIL could have had an interlude and then gang up on unsure son/husband.

Oh well, you're the author.

Thanks for sharing... again.

Trheesome with wife and your mom hope you keep your mom around long time.me got my mom and aunt with me living together both sisters they both been going down on each other since they were teens.they both divorced their husbands they said only need one cock that was me.both of them told me they had surprise for me saying both pregnant with my kid in them and also said my sister moving in as my cousin aunts oldest daughter.they said to me they want me to knock up both my sister and cousin.i did them both sametime.come to find out both are now carrying my kid in them now have four woman pregnant plus the four of them ly on their sides each lick each others cunt and I watch them start cumming together then I get on top each stick my cock in cunt and their ass.they each now have two kids each thanks to me both aunt and mom now in early sixties cousin and sister in their mid thirties kid are now seventeen they all take turns gangbanging now cum in each of the now.they have no say the bogs just go up to them and take turns fucking them each anytime they need to unload in their cunts or ass

Great lovely and hot story!

Gave you my 5*Stars!

Would love to see more chapters of this story with the Mom and her DIL getting even more closer and sharing some lesbian Pee Fun mmm

Got my panties real wet mmm!

Thank you very much!

Aunt Helena

Re: anonymous on 12/03/19...

I wouldn't normally care if someone made the occasional typo etc., but your comment was absolute rubbish!! Are you 7 or 8 years old?? Try using commas, and after a full-stop there should be a SPACE. And then the new sentence starting with a Capital.

Apart from the fact that you just made up all that crap, like a little kid, giggling behind the school shed. Wow, what a pathetic looser!!!

What a awesome read if you can find away for another chapter that would be grand with more water work would be fantastic

I must say that I am really enjoying your story. I am not a fan of waterworks. So, I was happy to see that you glossed over it. 4 stars

Wonderful!

Disappointing ending.

2 hot girls and you instead choose to stroke your cock. A double blowjob ending would have been perfect

Very disappointing as his mother didnot suck his cock. I was expecting a deepthroating and double blowjob. Other than that, excellent

Great story, my second time reading it and loved it just as much.

Great story, only thing better would have ended it after the (golden) shower scene. Lol..............():\

When I was married, my ex-wife and I used to fantasize a threesome with her hot mom. And Jacintha has that playful, encouraging attitude that my ex-wife has, so this story was a good representation of how I fantasized things playing out with my ex and her mom. Thank you. Always remarkable.

Very entertaining

I enjoyed this story.

Oh how fun was this?!

Loved it

This story was so Hot , loved that the wife & mom ate each others pussy's and mom licking Jacinta's asshole , blew a load twice reading this hot story , i'd give it a ten if i could , hope you follow up more on this cock throbber .

Lovely!

Still a really fun romp, even the second time around! I love your storytelling style. I’m working on reading through every single one of your works regardless of category.