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Click here"What?" she finally rasped at me keeping her voice to a dull roar.
"You sure you want to do this?" I asked. "You know what's going on behind that door. You really want it to go down like this?"
"You got a better idea?" she asked.
"I don't," I sighed. "But I can't see this ending well."
"It's not going to," she warned. "But I can't let him have his cake and eat it too. He's made my life a wreck. The only thing I have in my life worth keeping is you. Fuck him and my so called sister. She's been feeding him information that I've been telling her in confidence. She's just a conniving little bitch. He's been using that to play mind games with me ever since we left. It's time we level the playing field."
The door to room 150 opened and out stepped Jessica's mom. She saw us arguing and made her way down the sidewalk to see what the fuss was all about.
"Looking for your dad?" she asked startling us both.
"He's in there," Jessica piped back never missing a beat.
"With who?" Aunt Jill asked.
"Little bitch, Angela," she hissed.
"She's at home," she said in disbelief.
Jessica turned without hesitation and slipped the key into the slot. The light flashed green and Jessica flung the door open. The sounds of sex filled the little room as she stormed in, her mom hot on her tail.
They were too busy with each other to notice the three of us standing in the room. Angela bounced on her dad as she rode him with her back to us.
"You little whore," Jessica cried. "What the fuck are you doing?"
They both cocked their heads around to see us standing there. Stunned looks on all of our faces as they scrambled and tried to explain.
***
"Sometimes I miss the Florida sun," I said to my dad as we sat in lounge chairs overlooking the beach.
"I'm sure you do but the sun can't compare to what you have here," he replied.
He was right I thought as I looked down towards the water. My beautiful wife sprinted across the sand and grabbed our oldest child. She softly took him to the ground and started tickling him. I could hear their laughter as the other two piled on and tried to rescue their brother. She finally rolled off as they all climbed to their feet and ran in every direction.
So stood and smiled at me as she started to fix her tussled blonde hair. She looked just as beautiful now as she did 15 years when I fell in love with her that summer. Blew me a kiss as she started chasing the closest child to her again.
"Any word on Uncle John?" I asked.
"He has fallen off the face of the earth it seems," my dad said.
"Wonder if he will make it up here to see his next grand baby," I hinted.
"Number four in the oven?" my dad asked.
I just smiled at him.
"Hope it's a girl," he added. "Would make your mom happy."
"Dinner is done," Aunt Jill's voice cried from the porch.
We turned to see her waving at us as my mom set the roast on the table.
Jessica came sprinting by teasing the children. "Last one up is a rotten egg."
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- COMMENTS
vanyeabout 1 year agoSo, no resolution with the sister and dad, after the build up, bad form. Other than that, was ok.
Anonymousover 1 year agoFirst cousins.. yeah, did not work out for me. She was too young to fall in love, and I was too young to know....
Still, millions of such relationships succeed in the long run.
Interesting twists, Angela and Dad? Then the poo hits the ventilator....What?
Still a good series, but what happens when the female (dog) reaches her prime sexual peak and the male (runt) starts slowing down??? Suspect that the female dog has to be 20 years plus the senior of the male runt, who knows? Can't guess, since no one I know is immortal.
Carry on, give us another fantasy....like in follow me, I'm the pied piper!
Anonymousover 2 years agoAs Delftsejongen writes, a lot of fuss over first cousins. In a lot of places, paternal first cousin marriage is preferred as it helps maintain family closeness after adulthood by becoming in-laws. The fuss here in the U.S. is recent, historically speaking; 150 years ago, it was common. Yes, in Illinois, where Derek's parents live, it's illegal. However, in California, New York, and much of the South -- including Florida, where Derek was living, it's fine.
This one felt rushed. Almost too much focus on how Derek and Jessica can't keep their hands off each other, which by now we get. The flashing of strangers? An interesting kink, but didn't move the story along. The sentence fragments are okay they're not overdone.
I suspect that John's issue, since he WAS fucking Angela, was jealousy about losing his opportunity to fuck Jessica as well. That said, the omission about Angela's fate was curious. And what about Jill? Was she living near Derek and Jessica, helping with child care?
The other chapters were all 5 stars, but this one feels unfinished because there's no resolution about Angela.
Thanks for sharing. 4* TJ Skywind from my tablet. Slainté
lilshymynxover 3 years agoThis series had a lot of potential, especially the twist with John and Angela, but it was gutted by the writing. You have far too many sentence fragments, grammatical errors, and incomplete sentences which makes it very tough to read an otherwise great story with some real drama and conflict. It feels like you are going so quickly with your writing and just trying to vomit it all out. You could really use an editor or to make several self-editorial passes to flesh out your writing so that everything doesn't feel so abrupt.
goducks1almost 6 years agokept my interest until the end - which was terrific. but - since they weren't in florida - where were they? And - you could easily add another chapter. loved this story!!!!
thedayafterover 6 years agoAbsolutely great series, loved it and loved the happy ending.
Must admit thought it was all going to go wrong for Derek when he went to Jessica's wedding but so nice to see true love win out.
5 star....
rightbankover 6 years agoBut I think it would have been better if it ended at the airport. A brief prologue explaining it took a while for the parents to accept the new normal after which they and their 4 children lived happily ever after.
But it's not my story.
