All Comments on 'That's My Boy Ch. 01'

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tango602tango602almost 13 years ago
great work

that was great, one of the best i've read, please keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Find an editor

SOUL not sole, SEIZED not ceased.

Either read and re-read your own story, or find someone with at least half a brain to do it for you!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
more

That was hot. Please continue with another followup. I wish that had been me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Anon

I don't care how you spell, that story was hot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Oh please continue. I beg you.

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